Dear Bailey, Nice job with this project introducing yourself! I learned many new things about you. You mentioned that you like helping your brother, I notice that every morning you help him into school and to breakfast: so nice!! I also discovered that we have some things in common like listening to music, cleaning and enjoying having one's nails done (I agree, what a treat!).
One area that you can improve is proofreading your presentation, I noticed that you had a spelling error. Great work overall.
Dear Bailey,
ReplyDeleteNice job with this project introducing yourself! I learned many new things about you. You mentioned that you like helping your brother, I notice that every morning you help him into school and to breakfast: so nice!! I also discovered that we have some things in common like listening to music, cleaning and enjoying having one's nails done (I agree, what a treat!).
One area that you can improve is proofreading your presentation, I noticed that you had a spelling error. Great work overall.
Your Teacher and Friend,
Mrs. Starr